You MUST submit 2 attachments  in Word form- the original Affirmation retyped by you that is attached here AND a red-lined copy of your revised Affirmation in Word.
THEREFORE, YOU MUST 1ST RETYPE THE AFFIRMATION IN WORD FORM IN ORDER TO BE ABLE TO SUBMIT A RED-LINED VERSION IN WORD FORMAT. A MINIMUM OF 30 POINTS WILL BE DEDUCTED IF A RED-LINED VERSION IS NOT ATTACHED. 
The motion you are revising won. The Court’s decision is attached to the document. Despite winning, it is a very wordy and confusing Affirmation that could have been made much shorter, easier to understand, and stronger legally. You can build the case law into the affirmation as the attorney did. You should NOT include any additional case law. Simply use what is already in the affirmation unless you decide to eliminate certain things. For example, you may determine not to discuss or mention the two cases cited in the Affirmation, or you may determine not to quote from the Bill of Particulars and instead just reference it. Use what is already contained in the Affirmation and revise it. The cases as portrayed in the Affirmation are accurate.