This is the beginning of my thesis and will be the second part! It basically consists of continuing the first part (already done) by answering the questions in the second part (to be done).
I said that if you want to change the research questions, feel free to do it in your own way.     There is feedback from the teacher on the first part.  Please see the documents attached. There are my first part, the second part (the one that has to be done), three examples from last year’s project and the questions. 
LECTURE FEEDBACK: Solid Proposal. Well put together should work and a solid Proposal. Well put together should make a great report. ok this should work and a comprehensive lit review will help the identification of themes and provide the depth necessary. 
For the second submission Be sure to concentrate on the following areas (SEE PROJECT PART 2)
Then concentrate on the literature review and make it as comprehensive as possible under the heading of the themes that you have identified. So identify the themes and then seek 5 authors on each of those themes, compare and contrast the authors views and then consider what that means for your project, as in how can I use the information in the literature review to develop my research instrument, to develop the questions and topics that you ask in the primary research.