Task
You are a communications assistant to Michael Scott, a local celebrity and former paper executive. When Mr. Scott enjoys a particular business, he always sends a review which you typically write. He proudly asks you to look over a review he created using AI. He remembers it should be 150 words and asks you to edit it. Edit specifically for redundancy and hyperbole.
Example of Hyperbolic Statement:
“The restaurant we visited was the absolute best in the entire city. The food was so unbelievably amazing that it surpassed any culinary experience I’ve ever had in my entire life.”
Concise Edit:
“The restaurant we visited stood out as a top choice in the city. The exceptional food provided a memorable culinary experience.”
Review
Prepare yourself for an odyssey of unparalleled indulgence as I share my enraptured experience with The Paris Chocolate Company. To call it a mere purchase would be an understatement; it was a transcendental journey into the divine realms of confectionery ecstasy.
Let’s talk pralines – those little heavenly orbs of bliss. The moment these exquisite concoctions graced my taste buds, it was as if a symphony of flavor exploded in my mouth. Each praline, a masterpiece in its own right, danced on my palate, leaving me in a state of euphoria that only the finest chocolate alchemists could craft.
And then came the truffles – oh, sweet ambrosia! If Shakespeare were alive today, he’d pen sonnets dedicated to these luscious spheres of cocoa perfection. The velvety ganache, encased in a delicate shell, melted away any semblance of resistance, leaving only a craving for more. It was a celestial experience, a rendezvous with chocolate divinity.
But wait, there’s more – the milk chocolate assortment, a treasure trove of enchantment! Each piece was a testament to the chocolatier’s artistry, an opulent medley of creamy, dreamy delights. It was as if Willy Wonka himself had bestowed upon me the golden ticket to a utopia of sweetness.
In conclusion, my foray into The Paris Chocolate Company was nothing short of a chocoholic’s dream come true. Pralines, truffles, and the milk chocolate assortment – a trifecta of decadence that defies hyperbole. If ever there was a nirvana for chocolate enthusiasts, this heavenly establishment is it. Indulge yourself, dear reader, for The Paris Chocolate Company is not merely a purveyor of sweets; it is a portal to a world where cocoa fantasies come to life.
Instructions
Review all assignment instructions including the scenario details.
Use the 3×3 writing process to revise the AI generated letter.
Don’t forget that the word count should be 150.
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Reminders & Resources
Before starting your assignment, be sure to review the rubric below for grading details.
Proofread and revise before you turn it in! (see tools below).
Before you turn your assignment in, make sure you use a proofreading tool . . .
Have you considered using online tools or tutoring support to improve your writing and proofreading skills? Consider accessing some of the following options throughout this course:
An Online Proofreading Tool: There are a variety of free proofreading tools and services available. This “13 Best Free Online Proofreading Tools to Write Flawless ContentLinks to an external site.” blogpost lists some options. Grammarly (Grammarly for studentsLinks to an external site.) is a commonly-used online proofreading tool you can integrate with your web browser.
Please note that these tools are provided by external parties (outside of Ivy Tech), so make sure you are aware of privacy policies and other practices of any tool or company you choose to use.
Also note that these proofreading supports are just tools. They can fail to catch all errors or can include misleading information. You are still responsible for the accuracy of your writing.
Virtual, Online, or Campus-Based Tutoring: Check out Tutor.com Links to an external site.in our course navigational column to the left or check out your campus tutoring options for writing support.
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