Please slightly rewrite and edit given the feedback. Keep the essay in similar form but just fix the mistakes and improve the essay given the feedback.
This essay allows you to share with your readers an informed, analytic argument about what
you’ve learned and view as most important regarding the consequences of war in Laos or
Vietnam on people, land, and ecosystems. It is focused on the U.S military commiting crimes against humanities and ecocide traits shown through the Vietnam war. 
Make sure to define ecocide as stated in the annotations. 
Here are the sources used in the essay below (copy of reading provided in files):
“Crimes Against Humanity.” United Nations, www.un.org/en/genocideprevention/crimes-against-humanity.shtml.
“Events.” Ecocide: A Discussion of Law and Ethics | Sabin Center for Climate Change Law, climate.law.columbia.edu/events/ecocide-discussion-law-and-ethics. Accessed 30 Apr. 2024.
Kreike, Emmanuel. Scorched Earth: Environmental Warfare as a Crime against Humanity and Nature. University of British Columbia Press, 2012.
Long, Ngo Vinh. Vietnam: The Real Enemy. Seven Stories Press, 2015.
Nguyen, Tran, Vu. “Unexploded Ordnance Contamination and Household Livelihood Choice in Rural Vietnam.” Eurasian Journal of Economics and Finance, vol. 8, no. 1, 2020, pp. 39-55, https://rujec.org/article/79738/.
Son, Le Ke, and Bailey, Charles R. “From Enemies to Partners.” Anton, 2017.