Please do the following in the research paper:
– Clear thesis statement
– Provide a good research question
– Good Conclusion
– 3 Trends or graphs (with proper citations using APA 7th Edition style)
– 7 Sources Maximum
Note: 7 sources maximum but you can use an extra 3 sources for the graphs, so the total is 10, 7 sources for the paper and 3 sources for the graphs. Please include the graphs along with the research. (The graphs could be an image showing statistical data about a study or anything similar.)
The file attached is my initial draft of my research along with the feedback of my college professor. Please improve the research paper by following the feedback and correct any mistakes in the paper, also you can use different sources than the ones in the initial draft to improve it. Use sources that are relevant to the subject and show evidence and numbers.