I am asking because as of now, the paper is mainly quite vague and generalizing, touching upon issues of development aid politics at a very abstract as well as speculative level without much supporting literature. And if using literature, you could have engaged with them more in detail and in depth. Also, your briefly outlined overview of various theoretical strands is not really reflected in your subsequent case studies on Northern Thailand. Regarding the latter, your case studies are very thin, lacking any concrete source or more specific examples (of specific projects and locations within these larger aid schemes, for example).
See for a few comments also your paper attached again to this email.
Before submitting, you may fine-tune the sections – make them more specific with concrete empirical backing and some more supporting literature.