Good day,
May you help attend to these comments:
1.       
APA errors -Min 3
sentences in a paragraph
2.        
Unsupported statements
of facts
3.        
Random words
capitalized “For The goal of this study”
4.        
States: For The goal
of this study is to explore the reasons behind the slow adoption of new
technology in Zimbabwean banks and identify strategies to address this issue. –
nowhere above is it mentioned that she is going to explore the reasons behind
why there is a slow adoption.
5.     Rqs are not in alignment with the study. Is she
doing a mix methods? How would she qualitatively determine factors that impact
and reduce the speed of adoption?
6.     Interview questions would not effectively answer rqs
7.     Why would the candidate intentionally interview
participants who are prone to lying? How do they know this? “Despite
semi-structured interviews efficiently collecting open-ended data, the
participants are prone to deliberate lying due to not wanting to give a
socially undesirable answer.”
8.        
There are many
unclear/mixed statements about the study’s intentions. This does not
demonstrate an understanding of the purpose of their academic research and
doctoral study..
9.     “The study will analyze the restrictions
imposed by the lack of technical improvement, primarily within the banking
sector. ”
10.  “The study’s primary focus is on the aspects
of economic development related to adopting technological advances in the
banking sector to wrap things up.”
11.  “This study will analyze the banking sector’s
productivity to assist in resolving discrepancies between the findings of other
studies and provide a nuanced view of the fundamental contributions made by
technology to sectoral growth and development.”
12.  
No audit of the
references table
13.  
A minimum sample size
of 19 is quite a few for a dissertation, it never provides any justification on
why 19.