EXPERIENCED AND CONFIDENT WRITERS PLEASE BID HIGHER.
EXPECTING THE BEST PhD Dissertation + Artfefacts for Defense EVER.
FILE PASSWORD: msc5qBnW3c&r*2xqhW
Attached disseration and research proposal (as reference).
I’m looking to get my masters dissertation SIGNIFICANTLY IMPROVED (writing/rewritten/editing) based on the below feedback from my supervisors. The biggest piece is developing an artefact to defend. It needs a thorough restructuring. It’s over the place.
Research Question: How can organizations leverage user experience (UX) )-centered design principles in crafting security awareness programs and protocols to improve employee cyber hygiene and reduce insider threat vulnerabilities? 
Word Count: 13000 words
Require AI and Plagiarism Report.
–              Missing thesis title
–              Too many sub-sections, combine them
–              Too many headings that don’t made sense (e.g. why are you talking about mixed data research?). It doesn’t flow.
–              Jumping all over the place – keep every section focused on your topic/title. Make it simple. Don’t chase the word count.
–              ******What is the artefact? You talk about optimization and findings, but it’s not tied to any artefact. That is what you’re defending. Without this your grade will severely suffer.****
–              Include venn diagrams, workflow diagrams, charts in the thesis. It’s just blocks of text.