Comments from previous order: The professor sent me this “And why write about the commercial presented in the sample video? It looks like you didn’t understand the prompt which states that you need to choose a commercial or ad and analyze it (implying it should be different than the sample!). Also, there is no need for labels such as: Introduction: Description, etc.! From what you write the reader should detect that you are either introducing your topic, describing it, or analyzing it! I can see that the article you linked has that structure, but that is a research/journal article, not a rhetorical analysis essay required for College English.
Finally, why use an outside source? I required none! I need a response from you before I can grade this!”
Please let me know if you need any more information. This my last chance for this essay.
we will be working on new one when we are done from this.