1- Defines nursing informatics and the role of the nurse informaticist, but the description lacks detail or is missing important information.
Faculty Comments:I see that you defined nursing informatics. To earn a higher performance level, please elaborate on the role of the nurse informaticist as it pertains to Achieving Better Patient Outcomes Through Effective Communication
2- Proposes but does not justify the need for a nurse informaticist in a health care organization.
Faculty Comments:Your justification for a nurse informaticist was clear. For a higher score, you need to apply this to Achieving Better Patient Outcomes Through Effective Communication
3- Does not explain evidence-based strategies that the nurse informaticist and interdisciplinary team can use to effectively manage patients’ protected health information (privacy, security, and confidentiality).
Faculty Comments:I did not see this area of the scoring guide addressed in the assessment. In order to improve your designation in this criterion please refer to the assessment rubric so that all of the criteria are addressed. You must include evidence based strategies used to manage protected information.
4- Creates a proposal that lacks clarity and/or has errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
Faculty Comments:I like that your writing was very clear and logical. You organized content with a clear purpose. However, you did not fully address Achieving Better Patient Outcomes Through Effective Communication